A few comments by Maerlande:

==Setting up==


  - In create game, mention using the same level of independents as the MP game.  Usually 5.
  - Maybe explain 6 PD.  But for SP testing I use 11 if I can afford it.
  - For pretender mention that high resource or rec point units may need specific scales to work.
  - Good comment on disciples games and making both Pretender and disciple.

==Common Mistakes==

  - Nice use of the sidebar.  Good trick
  - For commanders consider a couple bodyguards for fragile commanders.  Something slow and tough melee.
  - Watch range of spells like bless closely.  10 squares.  You can count squares using arrow keys to move a formation.
  - For blessing with H1 consider hold attack.

==Choosing==

  - Consider bait squads of junk like markata or weak bats :)  You know :)
  - Blatant weaknesses on important troops like Yavana with zero protection and crappy shields.  But awe and hit hard.
  - The section on sacreds will need more development.  How do you evaluate them?

==Common Independents==

My quick list:
  - Barbarians
  - Lizards and shamen
  - Bone tribe
  - Poison in water
  - Dual dagger tribes (land and water)
  - Blowpipes
  - Heavy cavalry
  - Crossbows

==Scripting==

Big section and will take a lot of work.

==Advanced Tips==

=Flyers= 

I'm sure you have lots of hints for this.

=Tramplers=

  - I often use very slow heavy infantry with your best morale in the elephant squads.  That way they stay way behind.
  - Be sure to put commanders out of the retreat path of elephants.  Top or bottom corner.  Or if elephants on flank then middle.

=Thug=

I'd put in a couple examples.  There are not very many thugs that work early.

New section: Monster expansion

haha

I better help with the Kailas example :)  I better gitgud with it first :)

Naaira: Notes to myself
  * Remember mercs!
  * Backfilling and expansion patterns
  * Target numbers
  * Awake expander section?
  * Xibalba tips
  * Kailasa? Or Patala?